Nice job on you post...you might want to fix your format though.
Nice job I feel the emotion in your scene. Your should go back and put the names because I didn't know who is talking and when.
Really good job on the play just theres alot of stuff that you need to fix in the format!! keep up the good work KK!!! :)
Hey Kiki, I like your scene one it is really good. you had a little mis spelling mistakes and the names a little off but it is fixable. Overall I would like to know who that person was who entered the house when Jordan had to stay home.
Nice job on you post...you might want to fix your format though.
ReplyDeleteNice job I feel the emotion in your scene. Your should go back and put the names because I didn't know who is talking and when.
ReplyDeleteReally good job on the play just theres alot of stuff that you need to fix in the format!! keep up the good work KK!!! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Kiki,
ReplyDeleteI like your scene one it is really good. you had a little mis spelling mistakes and the names a little off but it is fixable. Overall I would like to know who that person was who entered the house when Jordan had to stay home.