Monday, October 25, 2010
“‘The Cold Equations’ from Marilyn’s Point of View.”
Marilyn just got hired at a spaceship job and she likes the job. There is just only one thing missing and it is her brother that she has not seen in years. Marilyn decides to sneak upon a spaceship and try to see and speak to her brother. But nobody understands that since Marilyn has not seen her brother in a while she wants to get a hold of him. The people tells Marilyn that her brother is on another spaceship so she has to wait to speak to her brother. Once the ship that Marilyn's brother is on she gets to talk to him and catch up on some things.
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I don't think you read and/or understood the directions correctly.
ReplyDeleteYou were supposed to include a topic sentence stating the name of the story, the current point of view, and the new point of view.
Then you had to share at least three details from the story and explain how each would be different if told from Marilyn’s point of view.
Finally, you were to end with a closing sentence that explains how point of view affects a story.
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