Characters
Name- Johnny, five years old, caramel skin color, tall
Name- Chris, six years old, dark skinned, short
Setting
In a elementary school in La Presa area.
At rise
Johnny is sitting at a desk in his school in the morning. Chris walks in and starts bullying Johnny because he was the first one in class.
Johnny
What a nice day today and im the first person to class it feels really good to be a star student like me.
Chris
[walks in class when johnny is talking.]
Wow, people just think that they are better than people just because they made it to class on time how cool.
Johnny
[Glares at Chris]
I hope you were not talking to me, because I know I am a star student and if you have a problem with it then deal with it.
Chris
I don't have time to be arguing with you over who's a star student.
Johnny
Anyways, I need to get back to what I was doing and so can you stop bothering me please.
Chris
This is not over yet Mr. Goody boy.
From your post, it seems that you didn't complete ten lines. If you did ten lines, I feel that your scene would be a lot better.
ReplyDeleteGood job but I thought you had to write about the picture?
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