Thursday, February 24, 2011
Wednesday, February 23, 2011
Persuading You to Read a Blog
By commenting on the freshman’s blog it will give them ideas and feed back on what they can fix or what they can impress. The freshmen are learning what they need to do in order to get a good grade on there blog post. By the upper classman giving their remarks and comments on the blogs will let them know that there is something missing and they can fix the mistake. Also by the time they become a sophomore or an upper classman they will know what will be expected in their blog post and they will get the process just like that instead of struggling.
Tuesday, February 22, 2011
Sophomore Paragraph
In order to be a sophomore you need to act mature and show everybody and yourself that you are ready to be an upper classroom instead of a lower class man again. Being a sophomore means to show the teachers and the adults in the classroom that you don’t need assistance for following directions that are given to you. Once you’re in the real world and you feel you need to be the class clown or a job clown when you’re working then your being really childish and immature. Also in order to be a sophomore you should not have to be told many times to do something.
Thursday, February 17, 2011
Similes + Metaphors + Personification = Figurative Language
Metaphors
1. Love is like a floating kiss.
2. Hate is like a dog scratching the door.
3. Life is like a pile of marshmallows.
4. Friendship is like a bundle of sweet tarts.
Similes
1. Community meetings are like a group of students.
2. Passes are like a vacation for a long time.
3. The gym is like a crowd at Del Mar Fair.
4. Your house is like a lot of people in the cafe on holidays.
Personification
1. Moon is a curled up nail.
2. Flower is like a sweet puppy.
3. Phone is like a talking parrot.
4. Car is like a moving train track.
1. Love is like a floating kiss.
2. Hate is like a dog scratching the door.
3. Life is like a pile of marshmallows.
4. Friendship is like a bundle of sweet tarts.
Similes
1. Community meetings are like a group of students.
2. Passes are like a vacation for a long time.
3. The gym is like a crowd at Del Mar Fair.
4. Your house is like a lot of people in the cafe on holidays.
Personification
1. Moon is a curled up nail.
2. Flower is like a sweet puppy.
3. Phone is like a talking parrot.
4. Car is like a moving train track.
SPA Poem
Life on campus is like a battle field every time you walk in the light
When you see students arguing it turns into a fight
Life at spa can be very challenging but you have to make it the best thing
When students argue with staff there’s no point, why waste your time when you hurt a joint in your body
When you see students arguing it turns into a fight
Life at spa can be very challenging but you have to make it the best thing
When students argue with staff there’s no point, why waste your time when you hurt a joint in your body
Tuesday, February 15, 2011
Free Choice Paragraph
I am looking foward to this weekend to spend time with family for president's day. I will have a good time because my brother is thinking about going to the mall and going to the movies and see a good movie. I feel that by having presidents day off is a really great idea because we get a break from school and the campus. When ever I spend time with family on holidays or just for the weekend I feel very special because I know that I have people in my life that care about me and only want the best for me and my education.
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